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Critiques
The first thing that bothers me is the shading. It's rough; not very well blended. I know it's difficult getting the right shading, but it can be done. Your light source isn't immediately apparent, and it makes it a bit confusing. Also, instead of adding only darker shades, try adding some subtle lighters as well.
Also, it seems your hand was a bit shaky while drawing the design as well as the lineart.My advice is to pick a route in your head and just do it; try to just go in one swift flick of the wrist.
Now, as for the anatomy. The first problem I see is in the tail. It looks a bit awkward; like it comes out too far and stays the same width for too long.
Also, the ears look a bit akward and...poofy, I guess is my word. They don't look as "attached" as they should.
And, to put if bluntly, she has no ass
Also, her paws seem to be just a tad small, and they're not all the same size.
And, I'm not sure about the background colour choice... I don't think it complements the colour scheme well.
Finally, I think the outline of the wings is just a bit too thick.
Otherwise, you've got a nice start. It's a ittle rough around the edges, but it's totally fixable if you still have the .psd. I think some sparkles on the wings would be nice.
Keep at it, though!
Anatomy critique, eh? I can do that.
Her body seems to be a little thin towards the back, when it should be just a tad bit wider (imagine if she was anthro, that would be where her bum would be, and where there'd be more curve) Also, there should be more "butt"
The forehead seems maybe a -little- too long, and the muzzle might be a bit too rounded. You could try making the change in width of the tail less severe too.
I really think you nailed the ears and her markings, and I love the stylized look of her wings. I'll look forward to seeing more picture of her in the future~
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